I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
You have some really great ideas here TJ. I like that you will care for your friends and family if they are hurt. I think you have made screen shots of your work on Google Slides instead of Embedding your work into your blog post. If you come and see me in class I can help you fix this. Good work
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You have some really great ideas here TJ. I like that you will care for your friends and family if they are hurt. I think you have made screen shots of your work on Google Slides instead of Embedding your work into your blog post. If you come and see me in class I can help you fix this. Good work
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