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Friday, September 2, 2016

One time gilberthorpe school went to the marten’s all of the kid’s Was very happy they get to go when they got up the top of the marten’s All of the kid’s. was playing on the snow all of the kid’s went down they big hall. and the kid’s start to go up then all of the kid’s. And they hope if they can go a naver time. and sow they can play in the snow with family and all of your friends so it can be fun. Then when you go back home and a naver day you can you. can tell your mum or dad if you can go. With your family and friends too. and your best friend if they can go but gilberthorpe school had the best day in the word. It then they can have a naver good day if they can go a naver time. Then they will be happy and they will have fun too. and when they were paly they also were playing they had fun they had a good day too. all of the people had fun in the marten’s. When they got to the best part was when they went down they long snow hepes of kid’s can go down and the family can go down to. Then when the kid’s got back up and it was there mum’s and dad’s to go next. when the kid’s got up they  there mum’s and dad’s they got a frit the kid’s were going a aigen when they went down they had. so much fun going down and the mum’s and dad’s went down it when they went down they had so much fun too. And the kid’s were playing with there friends and they had fun. When they were playing  the bus man got all of the kid’s to eat before they go home. When they went back to school they had best day ever. when they got back from school they got at five then they played some games and they went back home at five and when they got back they went to sleep.

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