I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi TJ you could add more sentences for another slide. Please add more slides and I couldn't understand it so it doesnt make sense to me. But great job on the work. Blog ya later!
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Hi TJ I am a little confused on what you are saying on you slide show could you maybe simplify it out a little bit more.
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And when you say haha that is not how you spell it but nice job by bailey.
ReplyDeleteHi TJ I am a little confused on what you are saying on your slide it is mooshed up together and change the color font please
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Hi TJ you could add more sentences for another slide. Please add more slides and I couldn't understand it so it doesnt make sense to me. But great job on the work.
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hello noah here you should add more stuff to make people insterested in your slide!
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