I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey TJ it'd Hunter from Rata, I like this post because it's about sport and sport is my favourite thing to do. I think you might have made a little mistake, Ronaldo isn't the best Leo Messi is because he has five Ballon D'or's and Ronaldo only has four, Messi got his Ballon D'or because he is the best player to ever live and he has scored over 67 more goals than Cristiano. This post is similar to my who should win Ballon D'or 2016. Maybe you could go check it out. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!!!
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Hey TJ it'd Hunter from Rata, I like this post because it's about sport and sport is my favourite thing to do. I think you might have made a little mistake, Ronaldo isn't the best Leo Messi is because he has five Ballon D'or's and Ronaldo only has four, Messi got his Ballon D'or because he is the best player to ever live and he has scored over 67 more goals than Cristiano. This post is similar to my who should win Ballon D'or 2016. Maybe you could go check it out. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!!!
ReplyDeletethere were a few mistakes in it but it is cool
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