Narrative writing!!!

Kia ora everyone I have recently been working on my narrative writing and we have been writing a story about just a random story here is what I have been doing!!! Manaakitanga

It was the middle of the day, josh, jesse, Ashton and TJ On a nice sunny warm day were playing on the field, me and ashton were vsering jesse and josh in a game of 2 v 2. We were winning our game by 5-4 but than the bell ring. We needed to get to class quickly but than we were in a hurry, somebody left the football on the field last. We didn’t know who left the ball on the field last, but someone didn’t wanna tell the truth! We asked our teacher if we can go look for our football, we all went out to go looked were it was we thought we had it with us but we didn’t.  So we were looking for the ball for a long time, because we wanted to play with it at lunch. We had no idea where it was last, we all talked about who left it on the football field. 

None of us didn’t know, so we had a vote who we thought who left it there last. There was 1 vote for me, 2 votes for josh, 2 votes for jesse and 3 votes for ashton, we all asked ashton if he left the ball there and if he did forget to bring it back, we got told who it was! It was (AShton) he told us where it was last, he didn’t wanna tell us because he thought that we weren’t gonna be his friend anymore. 

So we decided to be friends with him again because he’s really kind and nice to talk too. So after we said that we would be his friend again. He said “Okay I won’t do it again” after we got the ball we went to the field to start playing football again. We didn’t know he wanted to be in which team. We all agreed to play the first person to score a goal will be the first captain than the second person to score a goal will be the other captain. The person who scored first me. Than the second one to score was jesse!!! I got the first pick so i ask if josh wanted to be in my team, so he said yes please. So it was me and josh vsering jesse and ashton in game of football. We played for 15 minutes because we spent 5 minutes asking where ashton putted the ball. So we got in the game straight away. We played full field because it was better than a lot more fun to play. My team were winning by 5-3 and it was in the first 8 minutes in the game.
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