I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello TJ me Sophie here madey you can make your riting a bit bigger because I can not read it it is a bit to small to read. Gast that is some thing you can do so people can read it and say you be a good job because it is small so it is every hard to read that is the end by Sophie...
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Hi Tj, Tobey here.
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool and I like the pictures you put on this post.
Next time you might want to write more words yourself.
BYE!
Hello TJ me Sophie here madey you can make your riting a bit bigger
ReplyDeletebecause I can not read it it is a bit to small to read. Gast that is some thing you can do so people can read it and say you be a good job because it is small so it is every hard to read that is the end by Sophie...