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Friday, March 31, 2017

Dear TJ Noble

Dear TJ Noble. I hope you remember me your best friend Mason I’m here and I’m coming back today remember the teddy me. We done a lot a things along time ago help me your friends sister her name is Jasmine she is hurting me I’m sad now because you lost me at the park and she found me. Now she is hurting me so much now I will me sad for the rest of my life but I’m angry now because you lost me now I’m angry at you now when I’m at your house I’m gonna be mean to you and hurt you more and be mean for ever bye coming back to hurt you for the rest of you life bye TJ Noble coming home to hurt you huhuh bye.

2 comments:

  1. Dear TJ Noble it's your best friend here Jake.
    I like your story and it's really funny great job.
    maybe make it a bit bigger next time.
    Jake ladbrook out.

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