I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora TJ. Wow that piece of writing is awesome. But next time you should cheek that it makes sence and that your capital letters and full stops are int he right place. Other then that its awesome. Na Ella
Hi Tj it is Lacie in tawa class here nice job on this.I like the wow words you used good jon this.Here is a question how long did it take you to make this.
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Kia Ora TJ.
ReplyDeleteWow that piece of writing is awesome. But next time you should cheek that it makes sence and that your capital letters and full stops are int he right place. Other then that its awesome.
Na Ella
Hi Tj it is Lacie in tawa class here nice job on this.I like the wow words you used good jon this.Here is a question how long did it take you to make this.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora TJ,
ReplyDeletethis is a amazing piece of writing, but check next time that your writing is spelt correctly.
K, thats all from me,
Mikayla K.