"The buildings were tall"
The buildings were menacing in height with their neon lights making fit in with the rest.
"Sarah was really upset"
Sarah was lying down, emotions rolling in, getting the news of what happened and knowing she might never see them again. She didn't even notice the tears rolling down her face.
"She was so happy to see him"
She saw him and ran to him, with the expression you have on your 1st birthday.
"The lake was beautiful"
The lake stood while the it reflected it's lights, making good seem the wrong word for it, beautiful seemed to fit.
"It was stunning"
It was something angels would be jealous, something that I could steer at for ages not caring how odd I look doing it.
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